Lord Nikon
2003-10-15, 18:53:49
Für die Englischklassenarbeit kommen fragen zum einem gemachten Praktikum dran. Hier hab einen Text geschrieben.
Hello my name ist X X.
I worked for the “Schulverwaltungsamt Ratingen” as an administrator. Usually I worked from 8am to 4 pm. I did a lot of tasks during the practical course. For example , I had to configure the ISA Server in schools . The ISA Server is a Server that makes it possible to use a shared internet connection and to protect all pc’s that use the internet connection. Another task was to test “ KNE Autosetup” . This test took over 3 days. My normal task was to give computer support to schools. The first thing I did was to install network cards. The network cards receive their IP from the DHCP. KNE Autosetup is a program , that installs operating system and software that you select automatically. The work climate was very good. I understood myself very well with my boss. He made it possible that I could make a practical course at Peacock. The content of this course, was how you could configure a linux system very well. This course took over 2 days. I visited a meeting in cologne that was called “Systemlösungen NRW”. The organizer were “Schulen ans Netz” and (e-nitative .NRW). During this meeting I had to visit one workshop. I choose the Security workshop. That was very interesting for me , because I learnt a lot of new things there. My most interesting task was to plane a whole network for the Kopernikus Gymnasium Lintorf. For this task I had to count all network card an in this school and all network connections in the whole school. After this I had to insert all network connections on the Building plan of this schools. After all I could say , that was my practical course was very interesting , because I learnt a lot of new technologies and about the contact with costumers.
Ist der Text grammatikalisch falsch oder seht ihr irgendwelche Rechtschreibungfehler ? Ansonsten wäre es nett , wenn euch wenn ihr bessere Ausdrücke für Wörter die ich verwendet einfach postet.
Hello my name ist X X.
I worked for the “Schulverwaltungsamt Ratingen” as an administrator. Usually I worked from 8am to 4 pm. I did a lot of tasks during the practical course. For example , I had to configure the ISA Server in schools . The ISA Server is a Server that makes it possible to use a shared internet connection and to protect all pc’s that use the internet connection. Another task was to test “ KNE Autosetup” . This test took over 3 days. My normal task was to give computer support to schools. The first thing I did was to install network cards. The network cards receive their IP from the DHCP. KNE Autosetup is a program , that installs operating system and software that you select automatically. The work climate was very good. I understood myself very well with my boss. He made it possible that I could make a practical course at Peacock. The content of this course, was how you could configure a linux system very well. This course took over 2 days. I visited a meeting in cologne that was called “Systemlösungen NRW”. The organizer were “Schulen ans Netz” and (e-nitative .NRW). During this meeting I had to visit one workshop. I choose the Security workshop. That was very interesting for me , because I learnt a lot of new things there. My most interesting task was to plane a whole network for the Kopernikus Gymnasium Lintorf. For this task I had to count all network card an in this school and all network connections in the whole school. After this I had to insert all network connections on the Building plan of this schools. After all I could say , that was my practical course was very interesting , because I learnt a lot of new technologies and about the contact with costumers.
Ist der Text grammatikalisch falsch oder seht ihr irgendwelche Rechtschreibungfehler ? Ansonsten wäre es nett , wenn euch wenn ihr bessere Ausdrücke für Wörter die ich verwendet einfach postet.