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Gast
2004-12-12, 01:00:17
Freier Text, inhaltliche Verbesserungen fallen weg, da ihr die Vorgeschichte nicht kennt ;)
Dafür bitte auf Grammatikfehler achten. Der Text sollte in reported speech verfasst werden.
Da es nach Mitternacht ist, dürften Fehler die Regel sein :D



Gary told his parents that he’d been given a nice room, but that was only half the truth:
Many students slept not in an own room but in a big hall with beds standing next to eachother and a small cupboard in front of each bed.
That was because the Rugby stuff wanted the school to convey a very good impression.
Gary wondered about the stricted rules the students at Rugby School were imposed on.
For example, boys were told to be in bed by 11 o’clock. If they wanted to stay up longer they had to ask for permission first. Girls had to sign out, if they wanted to leave their house and put down, when they were back.
Actually, Gary thougt boarding school meant freedom, because you were away from your parents, but he soon realised that the exact opposite was the case: every minute of the day seemed to be organized.
At 7:15 in the morning, he was awoke by a loud bell. From then on, he and the other students had 15 minutes time to get washed and dressed until the morning assembly began.
Gary noticed that at Rugby School no parents or sisters said good morning to you.

Asking for the reason of his stay at Rugby, Gary’s partner Mark answered his parents had got a large business in London which forces them to travel abroad a lot, so Rugby became his home. Mark supposed students who only saw their parents in the holidays were maybe looking forward to meet them much more than those students, who saw their parents more often.