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Craig
2005-03-08, 22:42:24
Sollte nen Comment schreiben, wäre es möglich, dass ihn jemand zur Korrektur schnell lesen könnte? Bitte keine Comments, wie schlecht meine Grammatik sei; jeder hat mal klein angefangen ;).



Many people lack job satisfaction these days. What does it take for you personally to find a job and the work you do satisfying?

First of all its important for me, that I can find one at least. In this time it isn’t self-evident to find a job, with more than 5 million workers without a job. Secondly I want to earn a lot of money in my job because I want to have a family and to take care for them, so its important to get a good salary e.g. if you want to build your own homestead or if you want to have a good car. Furthermore I have to like this job. This job should not be monotonous and boring; I have to feel good with doing my work to feel satisfied. In addition to that it would be nice to have a nice boss and nice fellows, but you cannot chose them by your own.

edgecrusher
2005-03-08, 23:33:51
also mein text wäre so

Many people lack of job satisfaction these days. What does it take for you to find a job that satisfies you?

First of all it's important to me to find an employment. In this time it isn't selv-evident to find an employment with 5 millions of unemployed people. Secondly I'm looking for a well-paid job because I want to found a family and take care of them. This means getting a good salary is important. Especially for all the everyday life things like buying a home or a bigger car for the family. The third important thing would be that this employment satisfies me. I'm looking for a non-monotonous and interesting job. The workload itself should fulfill myself. And the last and mabye very important point would be a nice working climate e.g. my boss and co-workers. hopefully they are all friendly and try to integrate me as fast as it could be.

einige sachen hab ich geändert den grundtenor hab ich versucht drinnen zu lassen

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Craig
2005-03-09, 00:07:49
Doch klingt gut. Habs mal versucht in meinen Text zu integrieren. Dank dir.