Englisch - hat jemand Verbesserungsvorschläge?

[cereal]

Hallo zusammen,

wir sollen für die Berufsschule ein paar Wörter zum Thema "advertising" schreiben.
Ich habe mir das Thema "website" ausgesucht. Nun wollte ich fragen, ob jemand (Grammatik)- Fehler entdeckt hat :) ?
Die inhaltlichen lassen wir mal außen vor :)


Nowadays, there a numerous media with that companies become effective with the outside world. I find particularly interesting is the company's own website.
A web site offers firms the possibility presenting its products and benefits around the world, 24 hours a day, 365 a year.
Another advantage is that companies can create their web presence according to their own wishes.
Furthermore, each potential customer has the ability to get detailed information, completely anonymous. There is no binding in the company and its products.
Moreover is this solution in comparison to other advertising media a good value for money.
New information can be submitted to the customers within less time, they are accessible centrally and for the worst case scenario, double secured.
The flexibility and customization of their own websites are at the appropriate know how inexhaustible.
With a view to the future, having an own web presence, will be indispensable.
Finally, I want to give the following advice:
The creation of an internet presence should be well considered.
A bad presence on the Web, can be bad reflected.


Danke :-)

[huha]

Hallo zusammen,

wir sollen für die Berufsschule ein paar Wörter zum Thema "advertising" schreiben.
Ich habe mir das Thema "website" ausgesucht. Nun wollte ich fragen, ob jemand (Grammatik)- Fehler entdeckt hat :) ?
Die inhaltlichen lassen wir mal außen vor :)

Generell vielleicht etwas weniger "deutsch" denken. Man sieht es dem Text durchaus an ;)


Nowadays, there a numerous media with that companies become effective with the outside world. I find particularly interesting is the company's own website.

Würde ich anders formulieren:

Nowadays, companies can use numerous media to communicate to the outside world. One of particular interest is the company's own web site.

A web site offers firms the possibility presenting its products and benefits around the world, 24 hours a day, 365 a year.

to present their products

365 days a year


New information can be submitted to the customers within less time, they are accessible centrally and for the worst case scenario, double secured.

Da versteh ich nicht so recht, was du meinst.

The flexibility and customization of their own websites are at the appropriate know how inexhaustible.

Ich kann nur raten, was du sagen willst, aber vielleicht ist das besser:

Sufficient know-how allows for nearly unlimited flexibility and website customization.

With a view to the future, having an own web presence will be indispensable.

"With a view to the future" klingt scheiße. Schöner wäre wohl:

With future business opportunities in mind, having ...


The creation of an internet presence should be well considered.
A bad presence on the Web, can be bad reflected.

Vielleicht ist es absichtlich, vielleicht auch nicht. "Well considered" heißt "wohlüberlegt," ist also nicht gerade eine Empfehlung, sondern deutet eher auf ein Abwägen zwischen Vor- und Nachteilen hin, die beide etwa das gleiche Gewicht haben. In deinem Text kann ich davon allerdings nichts erkennen, deshalb eher:

Creating a web presence is a very cost-effective way of advertising and showing the company's benefits and as such, it is strongly advisable. However, doing the website design in-house, although it may be cheaper than hiring a professional web designer, should be well considered, as badly made websites can easily scare away potential customers.


Danke :-)

Bitte ;)

-huha

[V2.0]

Ich würde es ungefähr so formulieren :

Nowadays, there are numerous options with which companies can present themselves and their products to the world. From my personal point of view the internet website is a particular interesting part in the media strategy of a company.
A website allows the company to present itself to the customers with out being limited by location and time. It is available to all internet users from around the globe, 365 days a year. Compared to other methods of advertising the website offers a global coverage for comparatively little investment. Keeping the information up-to-date is easily done and so the customer always has a quick access to the newest information the company offers.

Each visitor can access the presented information as he wishes. The visitor is free to simply browse the website or decide to get into a direct contact with the company through the options offered on the website. The design of the website offers many possibilities for displaying the desired information in many flexible ways. With current technology is even possible to display that information to disabled people, so that even a physical disability no longer denies the information to the interested customer.

But a website is also a risk. If it is badly designed and not well maintained it can quickly be damaging to the public image of the company.

[cereal]

danke :-) ich bastel aus allem was passendes :-)